martes, 30 de diciembre de 2014

Women’s maltreatment should be considered as one of the most important problems in our country, but it isn’t. Every hour, every day, every year, the number of maltreatment’s women rise and we should avoid it inmediatly.

First, we should know what maltreatment is. It isn’t only the physical violence in which more and more women are involved. It also include the psychological mistreatment. Nowadays, our country has an alarming amount of women’s death. Agressive men usually hit their women and shout at them. Some men not only kill their partners, they also kill their self-esteem in order control them at all. Because of that, many women have killed themselves.
There are many women who have suffered from maltreatment. I have known a girl whose boyfriend abuse her. She started to go out with him and at the beginning everything was fine. She notices that he was a bit jelaous and it became worse and worse with the time. The boy didn’t let her going out with friends, she couldn’t speak with other boys, he used to ridicule, insult or even make her feel embarrassed. Even though, she loved him and she didn’t listen her friends and family. As she has allowed this, he started to hit her. At first, she only has small bruises and hits. This maltreatment was such a big one that, before that he gave her a beating. At the moment she endangered her life, she realize that it’s worth to stay with a man who hits her

There are few solutions to this topic which is affecting our society. We should teach men. They shouldn’t be violent and they should be taugh that hitting is not a good way to have the reason. I also think that laws should be harder because a man who mistreat a women can’t be considered a men. We must also protect women who are suffering this and give them a better life. Women should know that they are not alone, they can look for help when this happen. Women should also be taugh in order to know when mistreatment is affecting their relation.


To sum up, love and violence can’t be in the same statement. And if we continue like this, more and more women would die.

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